Rewrite . Touching the Void

Touching the void
   
    Touching the void was a real story about Simon and Joe who want to challenge a mountain in Peru. When they tried to descend, they got some problems at that moment. However, they still solved the problems and survived in the end. As a result, Simon and Joe were talented mountain climbers.

    First of all, they were brave. They had lots of courage to challenge the perilous mountain in Peru. They faced the bad weather, and never gave up for their trip. They helped each other out. Even though, they got injured on the trip, they didn't leave them alone. They take good care of themselves instead. In addition, they were intelligent. When they faced the big problem, they made the good decision to survive. When Joe broke his leg, Simon wanted to save him. However, it wasn’t easy for him to do that. Simon wanted to save Joe until they both in danger. Simon made the quick decision to cut the rope. He was survived, but Joe fell into the crevice. It was better than both perish at that time. Finally, they were successful. During the difficult trip, they didn't have enough supplies to survive on the mountain. They tried to find everything they could to keep alive. They found water, so they could drink, and rest to get more energy to go home. They finished their trip, and they are the winners.

    In conclusion, this was the most amazing movie I have ever seen. I really enjoyed the movie, and I felt proud of them. They showed me the way to reach a goal to accomplish the problems, and win the match.

Good Place for Study

Carl’s Jr is a good place for study

         Some people like to study outside the class, they try to find out the best place that can make them feel relax and comfortable.  If you are trying to find a good place to work on your homework or the lessons, Carl’s Jr should be a good chose for you.

         First of all, Carl’s Jr is very close to PCC. It's very easy to get there from PCC. We can just walk out the door and across the traffic light. After we cross the road, we can see the Carl’s Jr is on the right side of the Colorado Blvd.  It is very convenient for us and other students.  In addition, Carl’s Jr is very quiet and bright. When we sit in the Carl’s Jr, it is very peaceful. Also people don't like to talk loudly at that time; they enjoy the soft music in the store, and relax. Besides that, the light in the Carl’s Jr is very appropriate for study.  Finally, Carl’s Jr is a fast food restaurant, and sells different kinds food. When we hungry after the class, we can buy some food there. For the entire fast food restaurants around PCC, Carl’s Jr is the best one for us. Their hamburgers and fries are very delicious than other stores. If we are hungry during our studying, we can get the food as soon as possible.

         In conclusion, Carl’s Jr is the best choice for us. It can makes me feel very relax, and very comfortable. I think you should get my word. Don't miss the chances, and enjoy your studying time in the Carl’s Jr. (269)

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our classrooms are small but bright and clean


our teachers are preside over us and work hard.  Sometimes they are  very humorous


there are many computers for us to study online, and there are some tables for us to discuss

rewrite: PCC's Esl Program

Pcc’s Esl Program

PCC is a good college. We have been studying at PCC for about one year. I discovered that PCC has lots of good programs. However, the best program I like here is the Esl Program, it is very helpful for us to improve our English. As a result, we have some good reasons  why we chose PCC’s Esl Program.

First of all, PCC’s Esl Program use small classes. It's so different from other colleges. In the other college, they use big classrooms and a big number of students. However, we just have around twenty students in each class at PCC. We can hear the teacher very clearly when we in the class.  Moreover, for the small class, the teachers have more time to work on each student. It is very helpful for us to improve our English with teahers' help. In addition, we like PCC’s Esl teachers. In the past one year, we have met five Esl teachers so far. They were very patient and helpful.  They really work hard in the classes, and speak clearly. We all understand the lessons well in the class. PCC’s Esl teachers also have their own offices, and they always work in their offices after the classes. If we got any questions, we can find them to get help easly. Finally, PCC has a place called the LAC. It's the most helpful place for the programs. In the LAC, there has a room called the Esl Center. We can do our homework and read some books there. Also, it has a tutoring system and some tutors. We can ask them for help if we get stuck in our work. They are very kind and patient.

In conclusion, we like the Esl Program at PCC. We can get lots of knowledge when we study here. If you want to improve your English as soon as possible, PCC can be your good choice.

Rewrite: My Learning Styles

My Learning Styles

I have lots of intelligence. I need to discover the method of the style I like and practice for rest of my life. These are the best ways I prefer for my learning.

 First of all, the visual learning style is the most important one for me. I can understand the shape, the color, and the size of each thing I can see in my world. For example, when I am in my art class, the teacher told me to draw a picture, which he put, the model on the desk. I need to use my eyes to look very careful, so I can start my drawing. In addition, I like the aural learning style. It can help me to remember things very quickly. I can listen to the radio to understand the world around me, I can listen to the song on my computer, and I can listen to the tasks to do for my homework. Finally, I also like the tactile learning style. It can help me stay deep in my mind. For example, if I work in a factory, I need to make sure I put the same products in the same area. However, I can’t just look for them, I need to touch them, and feel them. I can remember better than just gerund my eyes to see.

In conclusion, these are the best intelligences I had for now. They are the best gift i had got in my life. I need to get used to them to make my life more perfect.

Multiple Intelligences Survey

VARK Survey

Vark Survey Result

Your score were:

• VISUAL : 7
• Aural : 10
• Read/Write : 8
• Kinesthetic : 10