Rewrite . Touching the Void

Touching the void
   
    Touching the void was a real story about Simon and Joe who want to challenge a mountain in Peru. When they tried to descend, they got some problems at that moment. However, they still solved the problems and survived in the end. As a result, Simon and Joe were talented mountain climbers.

    First of all, they were brave. They had lots of courage to challenge the perilous mountain in Peru. They faced the bad weather, and never gave up for their trip. They helped each other out. Even though, they got injured on the trip, they didn't leave them alone. They take good care of themselves instead. In addition, they were intelligent. When they faced the big problem, they made the good decision to survive. When Joe broke his leg, Simon wanted to save him. However, it wasn’t easy for him to do that. Simon wanted to save Joe until they both in danger. Simon made the quick decision to cut the rope. He was survived, but Joe fell into the crevice. It was better than both perish at that time. Finally, they were successful. During the difficult trip, they didn't have enough supplies to survive on the mountain. They tried to find everything they could to keep alive. They found water, so they could drink, and rest to get more energy to go home. They finished their trip, and they are the winners.

    In conclusion, this was the most amazing movie I have ever seen. I really enjoyed the movie, and I felt proud of them. They showed me the way to reach a goal to accomplish the problems, and win the match.