Rewrite . Touching the Void

Touching the void
   
    Touching the void was a real story about Simon and Joe who want to challenge a mountain in Peru. When they tried to descend, they got some problems at that moment. However, they still solved the problems and survived in the end. As a result, Simon and Joe were talented mountain climbers.

    First of all, they were brave. They had lots of courage to challenge the perilous mountain in Peru. They faced the bad weather, and never gave up for their trip. They helped each other out. Even though, they got injured on the trip, they didn't leave them alone. They take good care of themselves instead. In addition, they were intelligent. When they faced the big problem, they made the good decision to survive. When Joe broke his leg, Simon wanted to save him. However, it wasn’t easy for him to do that. Simon wanted to save Joe until they both in danger. Simon made the quick decision to cut the rope. He was survived, but Joe fell into the crevice. It was better than both perish at that time. Finally, they were successful. During the difficult trip, they didn't have enough supplies to survive on the mountain. They tried to find everything they could to keep alive. They found water, so they could drink, and rest to get more energy to go home. They finished their trip, and they are the winners.

    In conclusion, this was the most amazing movie I have ever seen. I really enjoyed the movie, and I felt proud of them. They showed me the way to reach a goal to accomplish the problems, and win the match.

Good Place for Study

Carl’s Jr is a good place for study

         Some people like to study outside the class, they try to find out the best place that can make them feel relax and comfortable.  If you are trying to find a good place to work on your homework or the lessons, Carl’s Jr should be a good chose for you.

         First of all, Carl’s Jr is very close to PCC. It's very easy to get there from PCC. We can just walk out the door and across the traffic light. After we cross the road, we can see the Carl’s Jr is on the right side of the Colorado Blvd.  It is very convenient for us and other students.  In addition, Carl’s Jr is very quiet and bright. When we sit in the Carl’s Jr, it is very peaceful. Also people don't like to talk loudly at that time; they enjoy the soft music in the store, and relax. Besides that, the light in the Carl’s Jr is very appropriate for study.  Finally, Carl’s Jr is a fast food restaurant, and sells different kinds food. When we hungry after the class, we can buy some food there. For the entire fast food restaurants around PCC, Carl’s Jr is the best one for us. Their hamburgers and fries are very delicious than other stores. If we are hungry during our studying, we can get the food as soon as possible.

         In conclusion, Carl’s Jr is the best choice for us. It can makes me feel very relax, and very comfortable. I think you should get my word. Don't miss the chances, and enjoy your studying time in the Carl’s Jr. (269)

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